Micro Tale - 6
"I have nothing to give you nor we can organize such either" her father coughed & subjugated in end.
"No sir you don't have to organize it but her" said in rock solid tone.
*her eyes filled with tears and so her father eyes sparkled with amazement*
About the story
This is story is based on the theme of curbing dowry system in Indian marriages or the groom should only be concerned with his bride not on the worldly material pleasures she come along with her.
- Story started with grief of the bride's father by informing that he is pretty poor person and can give nothing to the groom in dowry.
- Then groom responded that he is nothing concerned with the mortal wealth but to give hand of the real Laxmi (Hindu Goddess of wealth) of his life (bride).
- This made the bride emotional and his father turned into immense happiness.
Tips & Tricks
- This micro tale again illustrates the importance of having a crisp central theme. We also observe having theme on social issues has its own benefits that readers connect with it quite effectively.
- Also we understand that in literature it is not mandatory to indicate the sense of the author. It all nails down to the author how skillfully he explains his tale. As in the entire story their is no mention of the indication of it (you don't have to organize it) but we can perceive or introspect that "it" would be reflecting dowry.
- Also I would strongly advise my readers to learn words that can indicate the persons emotions like manner of laughter, sorrow, happiness or emotions through eyes or cheeks. Like for anger "turned into a hurricane of blue" or "his sunken cheeks got swelled up". If you want to show cursing tone then "he chuckled under the breadth" or "punched his fist against the wall" or "left grinding his gnashed teeth".
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hey I'm Arpit Agarwal (an ink pot) 21 year old aspiring engineer.
I'm currently pursuing engineering from MNNIT Ald. I'm a keen learner and writer.
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