Sneaking her Breath

Micro Tale - 4

Her hair brushed my cheeks

Her palm with wringling fingers of mine.

We both quietly titled towards other a degree.

Soon we narrowed the inches into centimeter

she blushed I sighed

About The tale

Firstly I hope you all are curtailing your own work (and if you have not started then please have a try!), text them in my comment box. I would love to hear a piece of yours.

OK! back to the topic ;P, as you can see it's a pretty easy micro tale. But the real element is how picturesque or descriptive you can make out from a small tits of incident
Now you can see in this narrator is in a kind of initial stages of a relationship.
Author is sitting beside her and it appears they somewhere have an affection for each other. As she allows the author wringle/brushed his finger over her palm.
You can see as the minutes of togetherness passed they both are peaking "by narrowing the inches" in between each other.

Tips & Tricks

the main aspect to learn from this blog is to you can yield a tale from the very tiniest or unnoticed events. Some more topics can be "my everyday lunch", "my dog licking my face" and many more.
Dip into the topic, imagine how you would react press those reactions into a paper. Reactions can be emotions, ambience or even the slightest of actions. Like "her hair brushed my cheeks". Like from this line itself you can guess there are two people sitting beside or in vicinity to each other, they both soothe each other company and many more such. Even hitting her hair on author's cheeks reflects that author also likes her company otherwise he would had walked away from her.

About My Blog - Micro Tale

About my blog - Micro Tale

this blog is entirely focussed on introducing his readers the beauty of micro tales

and helping them out in pouring their one's. Each one of us has a shear of pen

and always have unexpected pandora of ideas to write

but somewhere we need a guidance to kick start, some kind of fine lines to turn the first page of a book into black.

You just need a mentor who can walk and trot with you in every genre of writing.

You now have it!Subscribe and let's fill the world with your ink

About the Author

hey I'm Arpit Agarwal (an ink pot) 21 year old aspiring engineer. I'm currently pursuing engineering from MNNIT Ald. I'm a keen learner and writer. I've a strong affection towards writing and tries every spectra of it to contribute/add something to it ranging from poems on romance to solitude to incarnating micro tales and long story.